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2011. 6. 17

Essay 1

Should the use of cellphone be banned??

 

There are different opinions concerning about prohibiting people from using the cell phone. Some people disagree the ban. They argue that it needs for the purpose of important calling. However, I believe that not using cell phone is more beneficial. Because, talking on the cell phone keep people from concentrating. And it has possibility of dangerous accident due to multitask.

 

First of all, talking on cell phone in public place makes people annoyed. In other words, it is too noisy to concentrate on work. It is very rude manner. For example, I have watched movie in theater with my family. When I saw movie funny, I heard cellphone ringing. It drives me crazy. Others in theater too. I realize that the cellphone should be banned. Due to its harmful.

 

Secondly, A dangerous accident maybe taken place by using it. To explain, while talking on cellphone, you do multitask. So possibility of accident increases. For instance, one of the reason of traffic is cellphone. When we are talking while driving, it is more difficult to control.

 

Although it may ne needed, but it is necessary banned for these reasons. In the conclusion, I believe that banning the cell phone make people more safe and concentrate. Therefore, I agree this ban.

 

2015. 1. 6.

Essay 2

My favorite literature: the Three Kingdoms

 

If I am questioned about a favorite literature, I will answer “The Three Kingdoms”. In brief, this story is about combats among kingdoms in ancient china. The reasons why I choose the Three Kingdoms are two things. First, we can learn virtues through this story. Second, I met an impressive character named “Cao Cao(조조)”, who is brave despite small military power compared with his enemy.

 

First of all, the three Kingdoms contains hero’s anecdote. Through lifetime story of heroes, we can learn not only normative act like loyalty, friendship, faith but also wisdom.

 

Second, to my thinking, the most impressive story character is Cao Cao who built a nation named ‘wei’. He was not only brave enough to take a risk, but also brilliant. Let me show you example of his story. Cao Cao’s group had territorial combat with yuan shao’s group. Although his military power was much smaller than yuan shao’s power, Cao Cao believed that military strategy make it possible to overcome his shortcoming.

 

In order to win this battle, Cao Cao used bait to lure the enemy into a trap. The bait means provisions used to feed army. After the Spearhead of Yuan shao took provisions, they got trapped. So, troop of Yuan shao couldn’t demonstrate their military power. And then, he devised an elaborate strategy which can make discord between commanders. That is, Cao Cao made commanders of Yuan shao distrust each other. A letter with lie brought suspicion of yuan shao made it possible to change commander’s mind. As a result, his strategy was effective in that he minimized to consume his military.